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Tuesday, 28 May 2013

Taking My Netbook Home


Last we got to take our netbooks home. I was happy because  it will have to be one of the best experiences in the whole of my learning history.I can make more blog posts than ever and finish off more work I haven't finished at school. It has been a great time taking my netbook home but I always have to take special care. My netbook has helped me alot in my learning. Thanks to my teacher Mrs Aireen for encouraging me and my classmates in our learning. It has moved me up in my levels.Now I have to try and reach the next level and set new goals for myself. I LOVE MY NETBOOK!!!

Weekly Poem


Weekly poem

WALT read a poem and analyse the language features of a poem.

What makes a person more Beautiful & Attractive
is a genuine smile.
A bright shining soul that shines brighter than the sun, that can travel unlimited miles.
One who spreads Positivity & Love when they can,
and gives… Without a palms up hand.
Generosity,Understanding,Kindness,a sense of humour.
Someone that does Not spread hurtful rumours.
Someone who is confident,self loving, but does not brag about.
Someone who thinks shes beautiful inside ,& knows we are all equal,
Gods people without a doubt!
Always seek in life to Beautify Yourself & Others too…
So they may pay it forward &
be inspired by what they saw you do.
What beautiful people we’ll have to look toward too!
Endless Blessings & good karma will be bestowed on you.
Infect & scatter joy & positivity…
Not pain, hate and negativity!
Written/Submitted by Stephanie Rose Velvet Johnson.

1. Summarise the poem you have read in your own words.
  • The poem I read this week is about beauty.It dosent matter what  is outside of your body, it maters what is inside. This means people that have great personality even if their pretty or not. e.g People go for the look’s of other people but I think people should go for what's inside them get to know them then you will really know what he/she is like.

2. Identify at least 2 different language features in the poem and give examples. You can identify more than 2 language features.



  • One of the language features in this poem is a _ Simile____. Here is an example of this language feature A bright shining soul that shines brighter than the sun
  • Another language feature in this poem is a ___Metaphors__ .Here is an example of this language feature One who spreads Positivity

3. Evaluate (which means reflect and give your opinion) the author’s purpose for writing this poem - in your answers include the words: inform, entertain, persuade.

  • By analysing the poem I have read this week I think the author wrote this poem because she thinks people should not always feel beautiful on the outside they should always feel beautiful in the inside as well.
  • The author was informing the audience about beauty, it doesn't matter about the beauty outside of you it matters about the beauty within you.
  • The author was entertaining the audience by Describing how a person can be beautiful. (emotions/language features)
  • The author is trying to persuade the audience to believe that they are beautiful no matter what anyone says.

4. Add a picture on your Doc related to your poem.

Narrative Writing Words.


WALT:Identify and explain the main features of a narrative text.


A narrative text is a well explained made up story.

T-Title
O-Orientation
P-Problem
S-Solution

Language...

  1. Positive
  2. Poetic
  3. Dialogue
  4. Knowledge
  5. Talking
  6. Actions
  7. Interesting
  8. language
  9. Describing
  10. Good
  11. Links
  12. Characters
  13. Do not introduce a new problem in your ending or solution.
  14. Solution
  15. Conversation
  16. Narrator
  17. Wondering
  18. Comments
  19. ?
  20. Coda-Moral
  21. Eventually
  22. Meanwhile
  23. Suddenly without warning
  24. By the time
  25. For a moment
    27. Setting
    27.Punctuation
These words will help me get through my writing, I will also try to use it in my Narrative Writing to help me when im stuck.

Blog Commenting


This is a presentation to show you all my comments I have posted on peoples Blogs.

Netball


This is a presentation on what we did for netball

Friday, 24 May 2013

Blog Commenting


This is a presentation that shows me and my buddy's  Blog commenting. My buddy and I have been commenting on diferrent Blogs.

Tuesday, 21 May 2013

Thinking Hats


This is a presentation on the coloured hats